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Itex is destroyed, Ari is dead, the Flock is reunited and Max has found her real parents, but the question remains: what next?
Their next mission is one they have already tried for and failed at: high school. But now new hybrids are showing up along with a new company, Chimera Corporation. What is happening? Who is friend and who is foe?
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Adriane rouge « Thread Started on Sept 29, 2008, 7:00pm »
OOC Name: Adriane Years Of Role Playing: 3 How You Found Us: goggle Sample Role Play With Your Character: "Adriane calm down" a young boy snapped " it's ria my name is ria" Ria said fire surrounded her hands her eyes were glowing red. "just calm down" the boy said in a loving tone "bite me" Ria growled "Come on ria chica just calm down" a tall dark wolfish looking boy said putting his ams around ria "falcon let me just get revenge" ria said softly "revenge clouds the mind ria you should know that" falcon said "ugh fine" ria said letting herself be pulled into a hug by falcon
Your Character
Back To Basics . . . Full Name: Adriane senka rouge Nickname: Ria, nyx Age: 16 Gender: female Nationality: American, Russian
The Beginning . . .
Date Created: 02/05/1992 Created By: ITEX Created For: Assassin, Show thing Species Modification: is part avian Extra Powers: control shadows, fire, all of the kineses', turn into a shadow, come back to life, bring others back to life, heal others, morph into a tiger Allegiance: no one
On The Outside… Height: 5"9 Weight: 99 pounds Eye Colour: icy blue, Red when using fire Hair Colour:,blonde with red streaks Skin Tone: pale ghost like Overall Appearance: hair is short like a guys. ria is gothish. She is also a complete rebel. She is very skinny. Her wings are jet black.
She always is scowling. Her icy blue eyes are always taking every thing in. Clothing Style: She wears a back hoodie with holes for her wings. She also wears a black tank top. she offen wears army fatigues. and heavy combat boots. Other: she has the marking of a dragon on her left wrist. Celebrity: Josh grobin, will chase Picture:
On The Inside… Likes: falcon, freedom, music, acting, singing, theatre, messing with the interns fragile minds Dislikes: ITEX, white coats, needles, cages, tests, evil people, idiot interns Goals: rebel, be in rent, become a famous actress, learn how to spell correctly, stop evil Fears: getting shots, hospitals Quirks: humming, hits people when mad Habits: fighting, escaping Bad Habits: sarcasm, using revers psychology on people General Personality: Ria is quite. An all out rebel. She is sarcastic. uses people weaknesses to her own advantage.
Where You Come From family members: Mom. worked for ITEX now works for Chimera Corporation. brother: worked for ITEX now in jail. Pets: Janus her pet eagle One Good Memory: meeting falcon (her boyfriend). Her brother going to jail. One Bad Memory: Her first flock getting killed. Brief History: Ria had a awful childhood. Half of her family worked for ITEX. Her first 8 years involved cages, tests, erasers, shots, white coats and pain. She escaped ITEX with her best friend KAT, and her other friends Skittles, tallon and eagle. At 14 her and her flock were attacked. Her flock was murdered before her eyes. She was taken back to ITEX. She escaped again this time with two others she swoar to herself that she would not get close to anyone again. She fell in love with one of them a boy named Falcon. Her new best friend Carol was the first one to get her to smile again.
She got caught up into a darker crowed. She became an assassin for a well know criminal organization. She did it to protect her friends. About a year ago she meant Ever and Danny in new Orleans around Mardi gra. Ever is carols older brother. Carol and Ever just happen to be Ria's cousin. Ria gets recaptured and taken to Germany. Where she escapes from getting Ever fired. She brings ever who she know trusts to the organization she works for. Ever falls in love with a women named jet.
Extra info: Ria has always been overly protective of the few who are close to her. She has escaped from ITEX many times. She has always been on the look out for other escapes. She has her own house and motorcycle.
she loves fast cars. She will help out people in trouble. Ria is very good with all weapons. She always has a switch blade on her person. She can hack any computer. She is good at picking locks.
« Last Edit: Oct 1, 2008, 7:15pm by adrianesenkarouge »
Ohh boy where do I start, Okay did you even read the rules on bio's by chance?
Not only that you don't really seem ready for this site. Your grammar is very lax and you don't capitalize things before sentences in your practice role play.
Also You can only have one of the part somethings listed in the guides. You can not be a vampire because thats not a hybrid you can be. Not only that but that is not even a part animal. Stick with one animal please and thank you.
Also get rid of almost all of those powers. You can not have all those powers, thats too much that makes you to powerful.
Your history isn't even a history, you just told us a brief synopsis of what your character is like right now. The only history I saw in there was that she escaped from Itex.
You have no personality whatsoever, this is all part of reading the site rules.
In truth your character seems like a Mary sue and I don't believe you are ready for this site.
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Re: Adriane rouge « Reply #3 on Oct 9, 2008, 4:47pm »
Okay...You still didn't do all I said. You need a longer personality, 2 sentences just doesn't cut it. You can not be 5'9 and weigh ninety nine pounds because you would most likely be dead.You have far to many powers I think you should narrow it down to just one You don't describe her hardly at all, her body type or anything, you go to the bare minimum for pretty much everything. You know what try reading other bios for examples on how to write one because In truth I really don't believe you are ready to roleplay on this site.
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